This is the new story I am working on, I have the Prologue. Ignore the [Show a picture of -----] things, I haven't done much for the pictures yet, the * is where it's in italics, it's where Liz is writing in her diary.


**My name is Elizabeth…Liz for short for by friends and number 301 by the scientist…you heard me right, the scientist, I am one of those children from the Parker’s laws of 2023…This law…it’s a harsh one…America has been catching up to the Chinese in population, and a man by the name of Jonathan Parker made this law, a family is only allowed to have 2 children, the third, is to be taken from the house and experimented on once the child reads 10 years of age. Guess who that small child was, that’s right, it was me. I still remember the day very well, Mother was hugging me, she looked terrified, and I didn’t know why, my older brother kept Jason kept watch of the door, muttering silently. “Baby, look at me” my mother was saying as I watched my father hug my crying sister. “I’m going to need you do be a good girl” she was saying, tears graced her beautiful brown eyes. She brushed the black hair from my eyes and kissed me softly. ‘Can you promise me that?” she whispered. I nodded silently. “Rose, there coming” Dad called over to my mom. She nodded and gently guided me towards the closet. “Stay there, stay silent” she said softly she closed the door with me inside, the door was dark.

[show a picture of Rose hugging Liz]
[show a picture of Jason looking outside]

All was dark…I couldn't’t see anything, not even my hand in front of my face, I even tried too! But nothing…I never did like the dark and I started feeling around, knowing my mom put my bear in here before I got here, my hand touched something fuzzy and I grabbed it, pulling it close, relived that it was my bear. I jumped as I heard a sound, yell…men were at the door. “Let us in!” they yelled, slamming there fists on the door. Finally, it was quite, only for a brief minute before the door was kicked inward I heard screaming as, what so sounded like boots, stormed in the house. “Search everywhere!” a man yelled. I started crying, frightened, now I knew why my parents were so afraid, they’ve came for me, they broke the law by having me. I gasped as the door was suddenly opened and there stood a man. “NO!” My mother was screaming, tears rolled down her cheeks. “lease! Don’t take her away from me! I’m begging you” she started crying, struggling against a strong mans hands. “Control her!” the man, who seemed to be the boss, snapped angrily. I whimpered and tried to take a step back, but strong hands grabbed me, pulling me forward. I started screaming and finally…there was a sharp pain in the back of my neck. “No! Please! You can’t!” I heard my mother scream, then my vision faded to black as I passed out.
I still remember everything that happened from then on, the needles…the testing, the pain, and the new abilities that I have gained, I never seen my mother, father or either of my siblings again, however, one good thing did happen from all of this, I met a bunch of other children and even found someone to love me, I wonder if I’ll ever see them again…*

[show a picture of little Liz in the hibernation capsule thingy, make it look like its standing upright]
[show a picture of her and her boyfriend, as teenagers]
[show a picture of her mother pregnant with her, her father rubbing the belly\
[show a family picture, she’s a toddler now]
[show a picture of Liz with her arms around herself with tears rolling down her cheeks]

“Hey! Liz!” A voice snapped the young teenager out of her own realm. “Y-yes?” standing up she brushed the black hair from her face. A young boy with brown eyes came into view. “What’re you doing?” he eyed the book in her hands. “Wr-writing a little” she whispered. The young man chuckled. “Alright…well…it’s time for more experiments…” he said silently. “Alright...I’ll meet you out there” she whispered. He nodded and hurried off. Liz sighed and sat back down, writing some more.
*Well, it looks like I have to go…time for even more experiments…I just hope it won’t do anything else to our body now…well, good-bye for now.*

Liz stood up and put the book back on the book shelf, all the experiments had their own journal, and knew well enough not to get into other peoples, brushing hair from her eyes and taking a deep nervous breath; Liz went out to meet the others in the main room. The experiments had two main rooms, the main room that the scientist where calling them into now, and the living room, where they were free to do whatever they wanted, they had two different rooms, a girls room, and a boys room, both complete with a bathroom, even if it was one bath and one toilet, it was still better than nothing. Liz stood in line with the others, standing straight and looking straight ahead with her hands in front of her, just as the men walked in. Here’s where the fun started…



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